Your story is awesome Catherine! I'm so happy you shared it because I got to read it. You have a really good introduction to your story, a good middle and a good ending. I also like how you used adverbs like excitedly and slowly. If you want something extra to do during lockdown, you could make a cool animation of this story on EE and record your story :)
Your story is awesome Catherine! I'm so happy you shared it because I got to read it.
ReplyDeleteYou have a really good introduction to your story, a good middle and a good ending. I also like how you used adverbs like excitedly and slowly.
If you want something extra to do during lockdown, you could make a cool animation of this story on EE and record your story :)
Thank you Miss Scanlan for the Comment. Bye. Yes I will ad made it. Bye.
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