Hi Cathrine, thank for all your online learning. Remember to always check that you are happy with what you are blogging. Could you have made this story more interesting for others to read? check and have a look.
Hi Catherine, good girl for sharing your writing. I was happy to see that you used your full stops. Miss Tumahai had a very good question for you. She asked if you can make your writing more interesting? I know that you are a very good writer at school. I think that you can try to make your writing during lockdown more detailed and add lots of interesting words to it, just like you do at school. I would like your stories to be a little bit longer because I would love to read your cool, creative ideas. I'm sure having an alien as a friend would be craaaaazy! From Miss Scanlan.
Hi Cathrine, thank for all your online learning. Remember to always check that you are happy with what you are blogging. Could you have made this story more interesting for others to read? check and have a look.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the Comment and have a nice Day. From Catherine.
ReplyDeleteHi Catherine, good girl for sharing your writing. I was happy to see that you used your full stops.
ReplyDeleteMiss Tumahai had a very good question for you. She asked if you can make your writing more interesting? I know that you are a very good writer at school. I think that you can try to make your writing during lockdown more detailed and add lots of interesting words to it, just like you do at school. I would like your stories to be a little bit longer because I would love to read your cool, creative ideas. I'm sure having an alien as a friend would be craaaaazy!
From Miss Scanlan.
Thank you Miss Scanlan for the Comment and I will do some and have a nice Day. From Catherine.
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