Woo hoo Catherine, your rainbow sounds yum but what a sad ending. Thank you for online learning at home all your teachers thank you for all the effort you are putting into your learning.
Wow, I love your story Catherine. It's really interesting! I like how you tasted the rainbow and that it was blueberry flavoured. That's creative! You also used lots of detail in your story which made me want to keep reading. Well done for working hard on using all of your full stops, capital letters and even speech marks. KA PAI. From Miss Scanlan.
Woo hoo Catherine, your rainbow sounds yum but what a sad ending. Thank you for online learning at home all your teachers thank you for all the effort you are putting into your learning.
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Tumahai for the Comment and have a nice Day. From Catherine. Bye.
ReplyDeleteWow, I love your story Catherine. It's really interesting! I like how you tasted the rainbow and that it was blueberry flavoured. That's creative! You also used lots of detail in your story which made me want to keep reading. Well done for working hard on using all of your full stops, capital letters and even speech marks. KA PAI.
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Thank yo Miss Scanlan for the Comment have a nice Day. From Catherine. Bye.
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